Sunday, August 7, 2011

Chain writing-Dan's story

Good morning!
Our class did a chain writing 4 or 5days ago,( I can't remember).
'A' write a sentence, then 'B' write another sentence below that, then 'C' write anothersentence...
This↑ is chain writing.
We wrote 15 stories, but the story ownes to the person who wrote the first sentence.
Well, this is my story below, and it's fun.


1. In new york city, there was a rabbit naned "Dan".He was FBI, but no one knew.
2. One day, when Dan was taking a work, he saw someone trying to steal a lady's purse. Dan took out his gun ;and tried to shoot the man.
3. But then he found out that the man was his father.
4. But it was his job to catsh the thief, so he shouted "STOP!!!" to his father.
5. His father was so suprised, he dropped the lady's purse and ran away.
6. Dan went home that night and asked his father.
7."Dad why did you do that, was it really you?"
8. Dad said "Don't care about my business and study harder. You last score was 0."
9. That;s right, Dan's('my' in original) father's job was a thief.
10. Dan's(My) dad always used to steal lady's purse and that's how our house is rich.
11. So Dan helped him.(Huh?)
12. His Dad stole Dan's purse(What the?) and ran away but, he bumped on a tree.
13. There was a another FBI and shoot him.
14. The another FBI was Brian the strong but he died accidently be cause he didn't have gun.(Wait, wasn't -13- said Brian 'shoot' Dan's dad? And, Brian is a boy in my class!)
15. Hoever he wasn't actually dead and became the 45th president of the USA.(Well, Brian wrote this.)

Isn't it so funny?

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